怎么改陈述句？
题目属于句式转换的范畴，具体包括：
1、双重否定句改陈述句，把双重否定词“不得不”改成“必须”，把双重否定词“没有人不”改成“都”，句尾用句号。
2、感叹句改陈述句，把句中表程度的副词“多么”去掉，把感叹语气变成陈述语气，句尾感叹号变成句号。
3、反问句改陈述句，把反问语气改陈述语气，句中否定词变肯定词，肯定词变否定词，句尾问号变成句号。
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I
am
approachable
and
have
affinity
.
I
am
approachable
and
having
affinity.
如果后面用have,就得在and
have间加上I，为什么我也不知道。
As
a
girl,
I
am
attentive
and
always
pay
attentions
to
detail.
attentive
貌似改为careful比较好。
attentions
去掉s。
pay
attention
to
是固定搭配.
detail
用复数details
。
But
my
brain
is
often
filled
with
all
kinds
of
new
ideas.
brain改为head；去掉all；new这里用得感觉不大合适，建议去掉。
While
I
am
happy
to
accept
the
challenge
to
take
on
frustration
and
stress,I
often
experience
life's
ups
and
downs
and
learn
to
get
along
with
myself
through
going
long-distance
running
alone.
这句问题有点大
前半句可改为
Of
course
I
am
willing
to
accept
the
challenges
to
face
frustration
and
stress.
后半句改的话应为：I
often
go
through
the
ups
and
downs
of
life
and
learn
to
get
along
with
myself
through
running
with
long-distance
alone.
你才多大，就生活的浮浮沉沉？太矫作了也太个人了。故建议去掉。
while
不知你在此是作何意？当。。。时候？还是然而？前者貌似不通，后者又连不上前文。
Learning
music
as
a
regular
after-school
hobby
has
enriched
my
artistic
accomplishment.
enriched
改为enhanced比较好。
没时间
了。就到这儿。